Hi Sammy. It's Bella from Paroa. I really liked how you explained what happened up there and how you felt. I know how you feel being able to travel somewhere and have fun with your family. To be BTB you could maybe try working on your spelling a bit but other than that... it's great. Haere ra Bella
hi Sammy it is Keton here i love your writing and how you explained what you do there maybe you could of checked some of your words before you posted it but other then that i love it.
Hi Sammy. It's Bella from Paroa. I really liked how you explained what happened up there and how you felt. I know how you feel being able to travel somewhere and have fun with your family. To be BTB you could maybe try working on your spelling a bit but other than that... it's great.
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thanks for your feed back bella
Deletehi sammy its me declan
ReplyDeletehi Declan how are you thanks for commenting on my post how is your new school from sammy
Deletehi Sammy it is Keton here i love your writing and how you explained what you do there maybe you could of checked some of your words before you posted it but other then that i love it.
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